Kommentarer på engelska

Vid en snabb koll så hittade jag:
logout: you will be logged out of the .....

och jag tror att du ska särskriva web page

annars tycker jag att det ser ok ut.

underscore ,

Underscore är väl tecknet "_" när det handlar om text som är understruken heter det väl underline.

Bockar och bugar för kommentarerna - Web page och underline it is. :bire
Fortsätt gärna att kommentera, det är alltid lätt att bli hemmablind för det man själv skrivit, med underliga ordval och grammatiken från h-vetet som följd.. :)

Kom och tänka på att du skriver i.e. (för in example om jag inte misstar mig) på engelska använder de istället oftas e.g. vilket är en latinsk term (som jag inte kommer ihåg vad det är för tillfället).

Bara en tanke.

Den här meningen borde man kunna få till bättre:

When you are finished click on [Post] and your message will be posted to the Forum and you are redirected to the forum you posted to.

Typ:

When you are finished click on [Post], your message will then be posted and you will be redirected back to the forum your post has been sent to.

Låter kanske lite krystat det också...men men

Re: Kommentarer på engelska

Har ingenting att gora just nu sa jag tar mig friheten att kommentera denna text en smula.

SugarDaddy skrev:

Instructions for using the Forum/Getting started

1. In your web browser, please go to the webpage w w w. address till sidan

"please go to www..." racker gott. Vete sjutton om du behover skriva "in your web browser"

2. In the menu select the link “Forum”

"From the menu select forum"

3. In the upper right corner of the page presented to you, please select the option “Login”

"please select login"

4. Supply your credentials, i e the Username and the Password as stated below and click on [submit].
If you choose to check the option “Remember me”, you will not have to go thru this procedure again next time you visit the page.

"click submit" racker

5. After you are logged in successfully, you will be redirected to the main page.

"If the login was successful, ..."

6. In the upper right corner on the Main page, the option “Login” has been replaced with two new options – “UserCP” and “Logout”

”UserCP” – here you can change your personal information like Location, Field of interest, Email and address to your Homepage. You can change your password and select whether your personal info should be visible to other visitors.

"UserCP - allows you to... and your homepage address"

”Logout” – As it says, if you choose this option, you will logged out of the Forum and can’t post replies or start new threads. Important! If you are using a public computer, for example at a web café, library or similar, it is very important that you choose to log out when leaving the Forum. If not, the person using the computer after you might be able to post replies in your name if you have selected the option “Remember me” as stated in paragraph 4 above.

"Logout - this option loggs you out... you won't be able to post..."

7. The Forum is divided into Categories, each one containing one or more subcategories/forums about different topics. All visitors to the webpage are able to read all posts and replies, but only members of the Forum can post replies or start new threads. As a member you acknowledge that all posts made to these forums express the views and opinions of the author and not the administrators, moderators or webmaster (except for posts by these people) and hence will not be held liable.

"one or more subcategories/forums handling different topics"

8. Select a Forum by simply clicking its name. In the selected Forum you will see all the Topics associated with it, who has started a certain topic and when. You can also see the number of replies to a certain topic.

9. If you want to make a reply to an existing topic, select the option “Reply” in the upper right corner. Simply write your reply in the message area, if you for example want to make a link to another webpage, click the button and type in the address to the webpage as this: [ URL] here you write the address to webpage [/ URL]. The same procedure applies to the options bold , italic , underscore , image

Ja, det var vad jag hade att komma med.

Ändrat och bytt och möjligen tilltrasslat :)

Instructions on how to use the forum / Getting started using the forum.

1. In your web browser, please enter the URL for the web page.

2. In the menu select the link “Forum”

3. In the upper right corner of the web page presented to you, please select the option “Login”

4. Supply your credentials, i.e. the username and password, as stated below and click [submit].
If you choose to check the option “Remember me”, you will not have to repeat this procedure the next time you visit the page.

5. After you are successfully logged in, you will be redirected to the main page.

6. In the upper right corner of the Main page, the option “Login” will be replaced by two new options – “UserCP” and “Logout”.

6.1 ”UserCP” – here you can view and/or change your personal information like Location, Field of interest, Email and URL to your Homepage. You can change your password and also select whether your personal info should be visible or not for other visitors.

6.2 ”Logout” – As it says, if you choose this option, you will log out from the forum and you will no longer be able to post replies or start new threads. Important! If you are using a public computer, for example at an internet café, a library or similar, it is very important that you choose to log out when leaving the forum. If you do not, the person using the computer after you might be able to post replies in your name if you have selected the option “Remember me” as stated in paragraph 4 above.

7. The forum is divided into different categories. Each category may contain different subcategories or topics which, in turn, contains the posted threads. All visitors to the web page are able to read all posts and replies, but only members of the forum can post new replies and/or start new threads. As a member you acknowledge that all posts made to these forums express the personal views and opinions of the authors of the messages and are not to be associated with the administrators', moderators' or the web masters views and opinions and, hence, the administrators, the moderators or the web master can not be held liable for the contents of the message.

8. Select a forum by clicking its name. In the selected forum you will see all the threads associated with it, who started a certain thread and when the thread was created. You can also see how many replies a certain thread has recieved..

9. If you want to make a reply to an existing topic, select the option “Reply” in the upper right corner. Simply write your reply in the message area.
If you, for example, want to make a link to another web page, click the button [URL] and type in the address to the web page like this: [url]www.somepage.com[/url]. The same procedure applies to the options bold [b], italic [i], underline [u], image [img] and email [mail].

10. If you want to start a new thread, select the option “New Topic” in the upper right corner.
Choose a suitable name for your thread and write your message in the message box.
When you are satisfied with your message you click [Post] and your message will be posted on the forum and you will be redirected to the forum you posted in.

11. If you want to quote a posted message, select the option “Quote” instead. The quoted message will be presented in the message box as [quote]quoted text[/quote].

12. If you are the author of a post you can choose to edit your posting later on by selecting the option “Edit Post” in the menu.

Engine^ skrev:

... Instructions on how to use the forum / Getting started using the forum.

Varför inte bara How to use the forum. Och för övrigt, VILL du verkligen skriva "forum" - det är inte ett "community" då?

1. In your web browser, please enter the URL for the web page.

Behövs denna punkt verkligen? :q Var finns denna text? Ligger den inte på site:n? I så fall måste man väl ha hittat forumet innan man kan läsa detta, eller? :q :q

2. In the menu select the link “Forum”

Jag skulle ha skrivit: Select "Forum" from the menu. (Eller som Lord Moyne.)

3. In the upper right corner of the web page presented to you, please select the option “Login”

In the upper right corner of the web page, select the option “Login”, please.

4. Supply your credentials, i.e. the username and password, as stated below and click [submit].
If you choose to check the option “Remember me”, you will not have to repeat this procedure the next time you visit the page.

Supply your credentials, i.e. your username and password, as stated below and click [submit]..... next time you visit this forum.

5. After you are successfully logged in, you will be redirected to the main page.

5. When your login is successful, you will be redirected to the main page.

6.1 ... You can change your password and also select whether your personal info should be visible or not for other visitors.

You can change your password and also choose whether your personal info should be visible or hidden to other visitors.

6.2 ”Logout” – As it says, if you choose this option, you will log out from the forum and you will no longer be able to post replies or start new threads. Important! If you are using a public computer, for example at an internet café, a library or similar, it is very important that you choose to log out when leaving the forum. If you do not, the person using the computer after you might be able to post replies in your name if you have selected the option “Remember me” as stated in paragraph 4 above.

”Logout” – this will log you out from the forum and .....
Om jag var som du skulle jag lägga in infon om problemet med automatisk inloggning från allmänt tillgängliga datorer i punkt 4 också. Dvs att i punkt 4 - inloggning - varna mot att kryssa i denna ruta i detta fall.

7. ...., hence, the administrators, the moderators or the web master can not be held liable for the contents of the message.

... hence, the administrators', the moderators' or the web master's can not be held responsable for the contents of the message.

Om än lite senkommet så tackar jag för era kommentarer ang språket. :bire
Var "tyvärr" tvungen att langa ut min version till deltagarna, men om jag känner mänskligheten rätt så har hälften+ redan supit bort sina papper och det är dags för ett nytt utskick.. Har gjort en del ändringar enligt era förslag och nu flyter det.

- Än en gång, stort tack till er alla som tog er tid! :bire :bire