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Medlem sedan maj 20007 492 inlägg
Frågan#1

Jag har i uppgift i skolan att skriva en analys om en novell vi läst. Det viktigaste var inte att följa sättet man skriver analysen på utan att man inte skulle ha några grammatiska fel. Men även att jag skriver det som en analys.

ANALYSE OF HE WILL NEVER KNOW
By Richard Sherman

He will never know is a short story written by the American author Richard Sherman. There are only 3 characters in the story, the ex-husband, William Rennel, the ex-wife Janet and the narrator, who is unnamed.

The story is about a couple who have lived happily together for 6 years, but suddenly the wife runs away to California with there 3 months old son without giving her husband any information why she left him. It’s like this the story begins and you starts to wonder why she left him, he seams to be such a good and lovely person. Who decides to leave a happily marriage just like that?

The narrator meets Janet, the wife, for a casual lunch in San Francisco and they talks about everything you can talk about, except her broken marriage.
It seems like Janet avoid talking about it like she feels guilt or something like that. The narrator offer Janet a job but she tells him that she don’t want it, she wants to rest for a time. Here I got the feeling that she use William and that he loves her that much so he can pay everything for her and the baby.

The narrator and Janet starts to talk about all the novels and short stories William have wrote true time and here I find out that everything that William have wrote is about his wife and the stories is a analyse of her life, their wedding night, how it’s to have a hangover. He even wanted her to have an affair with another man just so he could write about it. I also got the opinion that he only got his wife pregnant just so he could write a book about it.
When you read this part of the text, you start to wonder what kind of husband he is; maybe he isn’t the lovely husband that you think he was. I totally changed my opinion about him.

The ending is very surprising, it was very abrupt. The title “He will never know” can have two meanings. William will never know why his wife left him, or he will never know how it is going to be to kill his wife.

The story is kind of short and the author doesn’t tell you much about the setting and place. You find out that the place is a dinner in San Francisco. The story could be written for 50 years ago or maybe yesterday. You see everything through the narrator’s eye.

I can’t really tell what the theme in the story is but a think it’s about how a lovely husband can turn out to be a real psycho who maybe even wants to kill his wife just so he can write a story about it.

I like these kinds of stories when you can’t see the ending, and then boom, you understand it.

Hjäp mig gärna att rätta så mycket som möjligt. Tack på förhand

Medlem sedan feb. 20022 594 inlägg
#2

Använd citationstecken runt bokens titel.

"with there 3 months" borde vara "with their 3 months"
"It’s like this the story begins and you starts to wonder" borde vara "It’s like this: the story begins and you start to wonder" ?

Nu orkar jag inget mer. Nån annan får ta över :)

Medlem sedan apr. 20012 427 inlägg
#3

Okkido skrev:

ANALYSE OF HE WILL NEVER KNOW
By Richard Sherman

He will never know is a short story written by the American author Richard Sherman. There are only 3 characters in the story, the ex-husband, William Rennel, the ex-wife Janet and the narrator, who is unnamed.

The story is about a couple who have lived happily together for 6 years, but suddenly the wife runs away to California with there 3 months old son without giving her husband any information why she left him. It’s like this the story begins and you starts to wonder why she left him, he seems to be such a good and lovely person. Who decides to leave a happy marriage just like that?

The narrator meets Janet, the wife, for a casual lunch in San Francisco and they talk about everything you can talk about, except her broken marriage.
It seems like Janet avoids talking about it like she feels guilt or something like that. The narrator offers Janet a job but she tells him that she doesn't want it, she wants to rest for a time. Here I got the feeling that she uses William and that he loves her so much that he will pay everything for her and the baby.

The narrator and Janet start to talk about all the novels and short stories William has written through time and here I find out that everything that William has written is about his wife and the stories is an analysis of her life, their wedding night, how it is to have a hangover. He even wanted her to have an affair with another man just so he could write about it. I also got the feeling that he only got his wife pregnant just so he could write a book about it.
When you read this part of the text, you start to wonder what kind of husband he is; maybe he isn’t the lovely husband that you thought he was. I totally changed my opinion about him.

The ending is very surprising, it was very abrupt. The title “He will never know” can have two meanings. William will never know why his wife left him, or he will never know how it is going to be to kill his wife.

The story is kind of short and the author doesn’t tell you much about the setting and place. You find out that the place is a diner in San Francisco. The story could have been written 50 years ago or maybe yesterday. You see everything through the narrator’s eyes.

I can’t really tell what the theme in the story is but I think it’s about how a lovely husband can turn out to be a real psycho who maybe even wants to kill his wife just so he can write a story about it.

I like these kinds of stories when you can’t see the ending, and then boom, you understand it.

Medlem sedan apr. 20002 487 inlägg
#4

Det heter Analysis, inte Analyse...

Medlem sedan apr. 20012 427 inlägg
#5

Muzzafarath skrev:

Det heter Analysis, inte Analyse...

Vilket jag påpekade ovan. ;)

Medlem sedan maj 20007 492 inlägg
#6

De flesta felen hittade jag när jag läste igenom allting en gång till. Men där var några småsaker som jag missat. Tack så hemskt mycket Skarre för att du tog dig tid, även du Ekström.

Det jag däremot inte visste var hur analysis stavades, tur att jag ändrade det, hade varit lite pinsamt annars ;)

Tur att man har wF! :f :f

Medlem sedan juni 20004 308 inlägg
#7

He will never know is a short story written by the American author Richard Sherman. There are only 3 characters in the story, the ex-husband, William Rennel, the ex-wife Janet and the narrator, who is unnamed.

The story is about a couple who have lived happily together for 6 years, but suddenly the wife runs away to California with their 3 months old son without giving her husband any information why she has left him. It’s like this the story begins and you start to wonder why she left him**. He** seems to be such a good and lovely person. Who decides to leave a happy marriage just like that?

The narrator meets Janet, the wife, for a casual lunch in San Francisco and they talk about everything you can talk about, except her broken marriage.
It seems like Janet avoids talking about it like she feels guilt or something like that. The narrator offers Janet a job but she tells him that she doesn't want it**. She** wants to rest for a time. Here I got the feeling that she uses William and that he loves her so much that he will pay everything for her and the baby.

The narrator and Janet start to talk about all the novels and short stories William has written through time and here I find out that everything that William has written is about his wife and the stories are analysis of her life, their wedding night and how it is to have a hangover. He even wanted her to have an affair with another man just so he could write about it. I also got the feeling that he only got his wife pregnant just so he could write a book about it.
When you read this part of the text, you start to wonder what kind of husband he is; maybe he isn’t the lovely husband that you thought he was. I totally changed my opinion about him.

The ending is very surprising**. It** was very abrupt. The title “He will never know” can have two meanings. William will never know why his wife left him, or he will never know how it is going to be to kill his wife.

The story is kind of short and the author doesn’t tell you much about the setting and place. You find out that the place is a diner in San Francisco. The story could have been written 50 years ago or maybe yesterday. You see everything through the narrator’s eyes.

I can’t really tell what the theme in the story is but I think it’s about how a lovely husband can turn out to be a real psycho who maybe even wants to kill his wife just so he can write a story about it.

I like these kinds of stories when you can’t see the ending, and then boom, you understand it.

Lite småsaker jag hittade bara, men det kanske redan är för sent :) (kursiv ändring bara en smaksak, kanske låter bättre).

Medlem sedan apr. 20002 487 inlägg
#8

Vilket jag påpekade ovan.

Men du glömde det i rubriken..

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