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title: "Början på en recension till en film... bra/dåligt?"
type: "forum-thread"
url: "https://www.webforum.nu/amne/film-tv/61831-början-på-en-recension-till-en-film-bra-dåligt"
topic: "Film & TV"
topic_url: "https://www.webforum.nu/amne/film-tv"
author: "trexter"
published: "2002-12-10T20:20:10.000Z"
updated: "2002-12-11T19:46:55.000Z"
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# Början på en recension till en film... bra/dåligt?

## #1 — trexter, 2002-12-10T20:20Z

Stone cold is a drama which consists of three episodes. The film is mostly about homeless people. The main character is Link, a teenager living in Bradford, UK. He lives a miserable life with no fiends and no social relations. In the film, you don’t get to know anything about his real father, only his stepfather, Vince. He is a rather cruel person and doesn’t take any responsibility for Link at all, instead he locks him out frequently which hurts him a lot. Link’s mother loves her son but she is not very happy to show it when Vince is around.

As a Christmas present Vince has bought Link a sleeping bag, a way of telling him that he’ll soon live on the street. Short after this event the family members starts an arguing whether Link is a bum or not.

Link has had enough and goes to London he rents an apartment but he gets short on money and he has to leave.
to be continued... ;)

 :)

Permalänk: https://www.webforum.nu/p/61831

## #2 — trexter, 2002-12-10T20:24Z

hehe, jag råkade deleta halva recensionen förrut men den kommer snart igen...

 :)

Permalänk: https://www.webforum.nu/p/883349

## #3 — #L#, 2002-12-10T20:26Z

> The main character is Link, a teenager living in Bradford, UK.

Fel fel fel... jag bor ju i Borås..

Bra början för övrigt :)

Permalänk: https://www.webforum.nu/p/883351

## #4 — Mr. N., 2002-12-10T20:31Z

Lite smågrejer:
Fiends = friends (om det nu inte ska vara "fiends" = bestar har jag för mig att det betyder...)

Shortly after this event...

> instead he locks him out frequently

 
Vem låser ut vem? Svagt syftningsfel tror jag...

> that he’ll soon live on the street

 
That he'll soon be living on the streets.

> the family members starts an arguing

 
the family members starts arguing.

Efter London i sista stycket ska det vara en punkt va? eller "and".

Permalänk: https://www.webforum.nu/p/883355

## #5 — Sang-drax, 2002-12-10T22:40Z

> **Mr. N. skrev:**
>
> the family members starts arguing.

the family members **start** arguing. *(pluralis)* 

Jag tycker inledningen var klen. De två första meingarna ska fånga läsarens uppmärksamhet. Repetera inte filmnamnet som första ord och byt ut de två första meningarna.

"Link is a teenager who lives in Bradford,..." eller ngt i den stilen vore en mkt bättre inledning.

Permalänk: https://www.webforum.nu/p/883464

## #6 — trexter, 2002-12-11T19:46Z

Haha, jo, jag hade slarvat ganska mycket upptäckte jag men det blev bra till slut. Tack alla!

 :)

Permalänk: https://www.webforum.nu/p/884004

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